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avunue123

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PostSubject: Contest Entry Thingamajigger   Contest Entry Thingamajigger Icon_minitimeTue Aug 02, 2011 12:55 pm

So this is my contest entry for TakeshiFlight's contest. First time doing CG for like, a gazillion years so... yeah :D CnC? :C SHIELD YO' LITTLE EYES D8

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry Thingamajigger   Contest Entry Thingamajigger Icon_minitimeTue Aug 02, 2011 7:27 pm

offtopic: WHAAAAAA I THOUGHT TAKASHIFLIGHT WAS A MANGAAAA. ERRRGH AND IT LOOKS JUST LIKE SANDEH. I THINK IM LOSING IT

For some reason..Her eyes are bugging me..and no offense but her legs kinda look like undipped pocky...Oh and I think you might have curved her elbow too much..

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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry Thingamajigger   Contest Entry Thingamajigger Icon_minitimeTue Aug 02, 2011 10:32 pm

LOL I finally noticed the elbow DX
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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry Thingamajigger   Contest Entry Thingamajigger Icon_minitimeTue Aug 02, 2011 11:14 pm

No offense but as I study it closer, it looks like a little obtuse angle that might be a little long..
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PostSubject: Re: Contest Entry Thingamajigger   Contest Entry Thingamajigger Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 1:21 am

CnC:
~The head looks disconnected from the rest of the body.
~As Tressa said, the elbow is much too curved.
~The segments of the arm are unequal. Measuring from the shoulder to the elbow, and the elbow to the wrist, the length should be roughly equal.
~The chest is really flared out.
~The thighs are really short. Please refer to CnC Point Number 3 (Shoulder=hips, elbow=knee, wrist=ankle).
~The butterflies are unshaded, making them look out of place.
~The thigh also curves in at the knee area too dramatically.
~The shirt's color around the chest area bleeds into the jacket color.
~The background makes the picture look flat due to the blue being only one shade.
~The shading could be blended a little more.

~Shading is accurate 8D
~Love the pose 8D
~The wings are so cutee xD
~The fingers are (MUCH) better than mine.
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